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Post by zacslilprincess on Jul 17, 2006 13:12:48 GMT -5
Here's a story I'm currently writing. This is the prologue. If you like it I'll post more.
Sometimes life can be so strange. One minute you have everything you'll ever need then the next it can all be gone. It's rare but sometimes, thanks to a miracle, you can get it back plus something you didn't expect. I must be the luckiest person in the world.
Tell me what you think.
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Post by mirandakane on Jul 17, 2006 21:06:23 GMT -5
Sounds interesting.
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Post by breakmydreams on Jul 17, 2006 21:30:42 GMT -5
I would like to read more of this...  |
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Post by zacslilprincess on Jul 18, 2006 23:04:42 GMT -5
Ok, here's more. When you see these things ~, and someones name inbetween them it means it's their point of view. Ok, now for chatper 1.
~Zac~
I can't believe it's been four years today since my girfriend, Riley, left me. I was walking down the street and I ran into someone. I looked up to see who it was. To my surprise, it was Riley. "Riley? What are you doing in New York?" I asked. "I live here now, what are you doing here Zac?" she asked. "I live here too. Ever since the band broke up I've lived here. Would you like to get some coffee?" "I guess." We walked to the coffee shop on the corner. "Why did you leave Riley? I really loved you," I said near tears. "I don't want to talk about it here. Why don't you come to my house tonight? Is seven alright?" "Yeah, I'll be there." "Okay, I've got to go. It was nice seeing you again Zac," Riley said getting up to leave. "You too. I'll see you at seven," I said. "Okay, here's my address," writing her address on a napkin and giving it to me. "Okay, bye." "Bye Zac," she said walking out the door.
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Post by mirandakane on Jul 19, 2006 2:32:28 GMT -5
Hmm I wanna know why she left.
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Post by breakmydreams on Jul 19, 2006 8:39:26 GMT -5
That is sad that the band broke up and Zac's girlfriend left... I would like more to read so I can figure out why those things happened...
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Post by zacslilprincess on Jul 20, 2006 23:12:45 GMT -5
Glad ya'll like it. Here's chapter 2.
~Riley~
"I'm home," I said as I walked into my house. "Mommy!" My four year old daughter, Destiny, said running up to me. "Hey sweetie, where's Emily?" I asked picking her up. "In the living room." "Ok, I'm going to go talk to her. You go play," I said putting her down. "Ok mommy," Destiny said as she ran to her room. "Hey Emily," I said sitting down on the couch beside her. "Hey girly, how was your day?" Emily asked. "Pretty good. Guess who I ran into today?" "Who?" "Zac." "Really? What did he say?" "He asked me why I left," I said looking down. "What did you tell him?" "I told him to come by tonight at seven and I'd tell him." "So he doesn't know about Destiny yet?" "Nope," I said going into the kitchen. "Are you going to tell him about her?" Emily asked following me. "Yes, I want him to be in her life. She diserves to know her dad. I just hope he wants to be apart of her life." "I'm sure he will. He really loved you ya know. I still don't understand why you left him." "I left because I thought he'd leave me when he found out I was pregnant." "I don't think he would have left you. He doesn't seem like tha kind of guy that would do that," Emily said. "I was scared. I'm still scared," I said with tears in my eyes." "Don't be scared. Do you want me to stay until Zac gets here?" Emily asked hugging me. "No, but thanks anyway," I said. "Ok, Destiny, come tell me bye," Emily called up the stairs. "Bye Emmie," Destiny said running to Emily, who scooped her up in a hug. "Bye baby," Emily said putting her down. "Bye Riley, call me if you need anything." "I will. Bye Emily." After Emily left, Destiny went to her room and I went to the kitchen to fix dinner. "Ok Destiny, timy to get into your pj's," I said after dinner. "Ok mommy," Destiny said running up the stairs.
Like it? Want more?
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Post by mirandakane on Jul 21, 2006 0:13:49 GMT -5
Wow. I never saw that coming. More soon.
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Post by breakmydreams on Jul 21, 2006 12:00:34 GMT -5
That threw me off gaurd... and I hope that Zac takes hearing the news of Destiny ok...
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Post by zacslilprincess on Jul 21, 2006 22:55:55 GMT -5
Time for more! Here's chapter 3.
~Riley~
It was seven o'clock when the doorbell rang. I took a deep breath and opened the door. Zac was standing there. "Hey Zac," I said stepping aside so he could come in. "Hey Riley," Zac said coming inside. "Have a seat," I said leading him into the living room.
~Zac~
"Thanks. So why did you leave me?" I asked as she sat down beside me. "Well, I left because I found out I was pregnant," Riley said. "So, I have a child?" I asked shocked. "Yes, a daughter. She's four." "Wow, what's her name?" "Destiny Renee Hunter, would you like to meet her?" "Yeah." "Destiny, come here please," Riley called up the stairs. "Yes mommy?" Destiny asked coming down the stairs and into the living room. "Destiny, this is your dad," Riley said picking her up. "I have a daddy?" "Yes, this is your dad, Zac Hanson." "Hanson? Isn't that a band?" Destiny asked. "Yeah, how did you know?" Riley asked. "My friend, Abby's sister likes them," Destiny said. "Oh. Destiny, why don't you go to your room and get ready for bed?" Riley said putting her down. "Ok, bye daddy," Destiny said hugging me. "Bye sweetie," I said hugging her back. "She's beautiful," I said. "She looks like you," Riley said. "I still don't understand why you left," I said after Destiny had gone up the stairs. "I thought that when you found out I was pregnant you'd leave me. So I left before you found out," Riley said starting to cry. "I would never do that," I said taking her in my arms. "I want you to be in Destiny's life. She needs a dad," Riley said wiping the tears out of her eyes." I would love to, but it will be hard seeing her everyday because I live an hour away from here," I said. "Well, you could move in here. There's plenty of room," Riley said. "Are you sure?" I asked. "Yeah, we would love for you to." "Riley, will you be my girlfriend again?" "Yes. I missed you so much Zac," Riley said wrapping her arms around my neck. "I missed you too baby," I said. I pulled her closer to me and kissed her softly on the lips.
Replys=more story!
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Post by mirandakane on Jul 22, 2006 4:10:43 GMT -5
Umm wow. Happy to see they are back together.
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Post by zacslilprincess on Jul 23, 2006 20:27:48 GMT -5
I'll probably add more tonight or tomorrow.
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